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Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot SX30 IS
Shutter Speed
1/25 second
Aperture
F/2.7
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Sep 21, 2012, 4:26:14 AM
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Embettered by PicMonkey. http://www.picmonkey.com
Sensor Size
6mm
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Green Eyes by Theanimalparade Green Eyes by Theanimalparade
My cat's eye. I'm surprised I could even get this shot because she kept moving.

Photography (c) :icontheanimalparade: (me)
Taken with Canon Powershot.

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:icontorivarn:
Hey!

You wanted me to give you a critique for this image. And as I tell everyone; don't mind the stars, they don't teach you anything.

Photographically:
Having a look at your metadata I notice that your shutterspeed is very low for a handheld photo. Normally you'll be able to do a decent shot with 1/60sec, but here you're at 1/25sec. The result of this is that you're image will be uncontrollably blurry. The best way to remedy this for a pocketcamera would be to add more light.
Also when photographing anything at all, always be aware of your framing. If you scan the edges of your frame here you'll notice that you've also captured a door in the background at the lefthandside. Me and you both know that a closeup of a catseye doesn't have anything in common with a door like that, so capturing this from a different angle might provide you with a pure white bakground (like your wall). The result of this would be a less confusing image to look at in the end, as the viewer don't get distracted from what you're trying to represent.

So to sum this up: add more light and control your borders :)

Post-processing:
It's quite obvious what you are trying to show me as a viewer, so you could add some more vibrance to this image, this would make the eye pop even more. Also giving the eye some more sharpness would help the cause.

Adding the photography- and post-processing part together will give you a slightly improved image.

Hope this was helpful :)
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DraculeaRiccy Mar 20, 2013  Professional
Amazing close-up, the details on the eye look really beautiful! I once tried to take a good photo of my dog and it was quiet difficult to make him sit still for a few seconds...and I guess with cats that even more difficult. :)
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:icontheanimalparade:
Theanimalparade Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Animals are just difficult to make stay still, I suppose!
But thanks! :)
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Himitsu4Schuu Mar 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This wonderful deviation was featured here: [link]
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:icondebbysh:
Hi :)
You have been featured in my Project Feature journal [link] !

I'm now collecting pieces about the theme "Cityscapes". I accept any media and anyone can contribute ^-^
If you are interested just note me with the link of some deviations!
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Theanimalparade Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :heart:
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Luna-Bell07 Feb 8, 2013  Student Writer
Its an adorable picture, doubly so for us cat lovers :heart: I love how kitty's so intent on her target!
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:icontheanimalparade:
Theanimalparade Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! c:
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wolfmaskman Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
i cant resist taking pics of my cat :P.
have a fiddle with the brightness and contrast values to get the best out of this image
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HayashiSorano Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow... that's a really cool picture :)
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Theanimalparade Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :3
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